Thursday 22 May 2014

My Special Place



My Reflection
I was learning how to use my senses to add detail to my writing so that I can make my writing more interesting for my reader. The thing that helped me was seeing an example because I got some ideas from the example. My next step is to use this skill in my other writing.

Friday 16 May 2014

Show Don't Tell



My Reflection
I was learning how to write about my feelings without saying it directly. One thing I could do better next time is use interesting words to describe how I feel. Overall I think it made my writing more interesting.